Thursday, February 17, 2011

Same Song Different Verse

The other day I received some comments on a contest I finaled in. Here's a couple comments.

You write WELL. I can see Olivia breaking down the gun, see her in her black silk outfit trying to be cool on the plane, sizing Joe up, offering him a particular smile…

I’m caught and reeled in. I’d enjoy reading the rest to see how you worked out the conflicts and got the two on the same side and into each other’s hearts.